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Monday, November 11, 2013

Batman- The Grant Morrison Odyssey: New 52 Style V2

What came before:

Part 1: Batman & Son
Part 2: Club of Heroes/Resurrection of Ra's Al Ghul
Part 2.1: Devil-Bats & The Bridge to RIP
Part 3: RIP
Part 4: The Missing Chapter/Last Rites/Final Crisis
Part 5: Batman Reborn
Part 6:Blackest Knight/Batman vs. Robin
Part 7: Batman & Robin Must Die!!!
Part 8: Return of Bruce Wayne Part 1
Part 9: Return of Bruce Wayne Part 2
Part 10: Batman Inc. Part 1
Part 11: Batman Inc. Part 2
New 52 Part 1


We left off with Batman Inc. #3 and Damian "Redbird" Wayne surrounded by a pack of dogs; a cliffhanger ending that is left dangling for the following issue due to a number of factors.  The first factor was the delay in that issue shipping due to the Aurora, CO shooting at The Dark Knight Rises and you can read more about the delay here.  The second factor that plays into the cliffhanger left dangling was the decision by DC to run a Zero Month to celebrate the first anniversary of the New 52 with the issues looking back on the history of the New 52 while also introducing a few new books of which only Talon and Phantom Stranger remain. For a book that was only a few months into its run, at least this iteration of it, it was kind of an abrupt cut but given the nature of this book I don't think there would ever have been a natural breaking point to insert this issue:


Page one throws us into the "old" DCU with an in-between the scenes look at the close of the Club of Heroes/Black Glove arc from Batman. We are watching the Island of Dr. Mayhew blow up as Batman and the surviving members of the Club escape.  We clearly see Knight, Squire, El Guapo,  and The Musketeer while the shadow of Man-of-Bats is noticeable in another scene.  It's a brief scene but it puts some historical context to this issue as well as establishes the mindset of certain characters following the events on The Island.












The following page (the one on the right) pulls from the very first issue of Batman (the one on the left) with the title of the page.  It may use the title from the original #1 but it's also an amalgamation of Year One as well as elements of Grant Morrison's take.  The bell, its ringing, and what it represented was an important story element throughout the pre-Batman Incorporated issues that I talked about previously.

What is most important about this entire sequence on the next page, maybe the most important panel in the entire series, is the very first panel:


"I was never alone."

Alfred Pennyworth, James Gordon, Dick Grayson, Barbara Gordon, Jason Todd, Tim Drake, Damian Wayne: some of the members of the Bat-family that have been there in various forms at one point or another during the crime fighting tenure of Bruce Wayne.  Since day one Bruce has had Alfred for support and that is what is so significant about ringing that bell as it pertains to the idea of Batman Incorporated.

The next eight panels represent first Bruce's fall into the cave, then the blackness, then the "death" at Darkseid's hands (or whoever it is in the New 52) that sent Bruce spinning through time, and the final 5 panels in the sequence represent what I would have presumed he saw during that look at time which presumably took place inside Vanishing Point during Return of Bruce Wayne. Unfortunately my presumptions are somewhat shaken when Bats says this happened inside the cave which I assume is the cave at the close of Final Crisis/beginning of ROBW; then again it could be the Thogal cave too.  Also of note, "two headstones...", look back at the image from issue one of this volume of Inc...


The world isn't in flames but there's a pair of tombstones. Could be Martha and Thomas, could be anyone else...

Scene jumps to another background piece as Bruce is now proposing, rather telling, his board about the Batman Incorporated program.  I suppose this would situate the scene post-Batman & Robin #16 when he announced it to the world.  A historical nod to Victim's Inc.(a program established many moons ago, #217 to be exact) is tossed in there but my favorite moment of this page is the final panel as Bruce singles out one Mr. Treadwell as looking...uncomfortable.  It's a play off Damian's calling out the same guy during B&R:

In that case it was in reference to an abundance of money being diverted to a Thomas Wayne foundation set-up for railroad victims. Thomas, as you may recall, is also known as Dr. Hurt/El Penitente and that point of the arc was revolving around the Mexican train.  In this case Treadwell is being popped for for embezzlement and accepting bribes amongst other things.  It's also nice to see Dick & Damian side-by-side one more time in the Batman and Robin gear.


The most curious part of this entire page is not the Bat-Robots (last seen during Vol. 1 of Inc I believe) fighting but rather how the story is tagged BEFORE THE NEW 52! That's the same way the Leviathan Strikes! story was tagged as well and it the title "Brand Building" harkens back to the "Building a Better Batmobile" story title for me as well.

Back to Knight and Squire, a reference to a Yemen mission which I do believe is the mission from Batman: The Return that gave us the torn out whale, the first appearance of Heretic, and bridged the gap between Morrison's Batman & Robin and Batman Inc Vol. 1.  This also marks the first of what turns into a running gag throughout Inc. with a shrink ray reference.  Other people on the internets inform me that some of this is also a reference to the Danger Mouse cartoon which I grew up watching on Nickelodeon but I don't remember it specifically enough.

By the way, reading someone else's interpretations of this same material has been very helpful in making some sense out of certain points that I didn't quite wrap my head around initially or in giving me specific issues to reference when I couldn't remember them myself. 

Anyway...

From Knight & Squire the scene moves to the Club of Heroes Dark Ranger, or rather his sidekick Scout, who has taken up as a tattoo artist.  Not sure if there's anything to the Crystal Creature or Cyclops creature but it does seem like the kind of thing we may have seen in a Batman comic from the 1960's. I mean those are the books in which we got this:


Knight, in disguise, attacks Scout as a test but Scout states he gave up that mantle after Dark Ranger died back on Mayhew's island.  Knight still puts the decision in the hands of Johnny Riley, telling him to hit up Squire if he needs to talk, then we cut to Russia...

Ravil was killed off in the New 52 Batman & Robin #1 by Nobody before he ever did anything, but he had a Bat Bus so therefore he is awesome.  Also we get a nod to Damian's age and I am not entirely sure how it jives with any other non-Morrison points where his age has been noted, it is nice to see it acknowledged.

The Musketeer pops back up, reinforcing his statement on page one that he is out of the game, but we see The Nightrunner come back into the picture.

Back to Scout as he is somewhat tormented by the choice to take up the Dark Ranger mantle.  He obviously took Knight's advice to contact Squire since we are seeing her hologram.  Scout's struggle comes from the fact that he wasn't there on Mayhew's island and a measure of guilt about his predecessor's death being due to his absence.  Squire gives the pep talk, telling Johnny he's cute when he scowls, and sowing those romantic seeds I suppose.

Time for catch-up with Man-of-Bats and Red Raven:

There focus has always been on the community and obviously continues to be.  That Jeff Moon guy did make an appearance in their Vol. 1 story in issue #7 as well.

Our world tour then takes us to Japan where we revisit Jiro, the Batman of Japan, rocking new duds which make it so he no longer look like a Batman. The gorilla and Doubleface are references to the Bat-Manga (putting it in continuity I suppose) while anyone who read Final Crisis is aware of the Super Young Team and this would likely be their first reference in the New 52.  And yes, Jiro gives us our second shrink ray reference of this book...

The El Gaucho page is one deep in history as it references his previous appearances in both Vol. 1 & Vol. 2 of Batman Inc and also shows us he is the only one of the group who Bruce gave zero choice to when it came to joining the group.

Finally we wrap things up with a return to the new Dark Ranger on his first outing alongside Batman before we return to the Batcave.  Bruce is doing one-armed pull-ups on a stalactite...

Alfred notes the burgeoning relationship between Ranger & Squire as well as shows us a side of Bruce we don't frequently see; a thankful one. "...You always have food waiting on the table for me. Thank you."

I must note that I find it extremely purposeful that the final line in the book is "...it all comes around in the end" given the circular nature of this entire epic.  The Ouroboros, a snake eating its own tale, a ring around the world, the fact that this is in a 0 issue, it started with Talia in Batman & Son and has come back to Talia.


So, despite having originally wrapped up my zero issue blog like a month ago, I am only now publishing it because yeah I originally intended to write about 3-4 issues at once like I did with the pre-New 52 Morrison blogs.  Problem was I finally realized that (a) they turn out ridiculously long and (b) it is insanely time-consuming to for me to do that. 

So I am going to keep putting them out there, one or two issues per, depending on my free time. If you have any interest in reading more of the stuff that falls out of my brain in the interim, you can check me out on Sequart!







Friday, September 27, 2013

Batman-The Grant Morrison Odyssey: New 52 Style V1




The New 52 changed everything for DC Comics.

Lois & Clark, Barry & Iris, and Arthur & Mera apparently...their marriages never existed; in the case of the first two couples it seems their romantic relationships never blossomed in any form!

Still love was far from the only victim of the change though...

Wally West...Stephanie Brown...and Cassandra Cain all ceased to exist (at least thus far) as did the Justice Society of American and its plethora of members.  Sure certain JSA characters eventually came to exist in the world of James Robinson's Earth 2 book but their origins were vastly different as was their historical importance to the larger DCU.  Jay Garrick, Alan Scott, Al Pratt: rather than standing as the fathers of a superhero movement they, along with Hawkwoman, Dr. Fate, and a new Batman represent the 2nd generation of heroes on an Earth-2 that saw Batman, Superman, and Wonder Woman fall in battle with Darkseid & the hordes of Apokolips.

In the New 52, characters became younger, their timelines truncated, their histories either changed or, in the case of the Bat & GL corners of the DCU, uber-compressed into a roughly 5 year time frame.  This of course is an idea fans (myself included) have had a hard time accepting given the level of chaos that has occurred in their respective worlds, particularly in the last real-time decade.

Into that New 52, along with the aforementioned Earth 2 book amongst others, Batman Inc. (Vol. 2) was introduced as part of the "2nd Wave".  Heralded as the grand conclusion of Grant Morrison's Bat-Opus, of which I have written about extensively in the links below, it is a series mired in the rich history of the Old DCU (including characters who no longer existed) and every fan salivated wondering just how Morrison would fit into the new world in which he was relaunching this book.

Before I jump in to the meat, here are all of the previous chapters in this very long journey for your perusal:

Part 1: Batman & Son
Part 2: Club of Heroes/Resurrection of Ra's Al Ghul
Part 2.1: Devil-Bats & The Bridge to RIP
Part 3: RIP
Part 4: The Missing Chapter/Last Rites/Final Crisis
Part 5: Batman Reborn
Part 6:Blackest Knight/Batman vs. Robin
Part 7: Batman & Robin Must Die!!!
Part 8: Return of Bruce Wayne Part 1
Part 9: Return of Bruce Wayne Part 2
Part 10: Batman Inc. Part 1
Part 11: Batman Inc. Part 2








With issue number one the first page doesn't pick up from where things were left off in the Batman Incorporated: Leviathan Strikes! Special rather it jumps right into the heart of the story with a page of sadness and confusion:


A rain-soaked Bruce in front of two graves (his parents' perhaps), telling Alfred that everything is over and to tell the others, presumably meaning the extended Bat-family.  That final panel on the first page of Commissioner Gordon calling for the arrest is certainly shocking, especially when you turn the page to see what happens only to find the story rewinding back to "one month previously".

A page of beautiful Chris Burnham art (love the Dark Tower food bag btw) depicts Batman & Robin hurdling out of the Batmobile and into the rain (a bit of visual continuity I suppose).  Side note, the issue's title is "Demon Star" which, as we know from Vol. 1, is the eye of Gorgon/a star in the constellation Perseus/also call Algol/Al Ghul/Demon's Head!

The chase is on after a ludicrous Goat-headed guy with a gun who runs into a meat packing plant.  Of note during the chase though are a pair of trucks in the background with upside down stars as their logo and either "Long Star Brand" or "Lone Star Brand" as the company.  Oh yes, and the Goat Headed guys motorcycle also has a giant goat head on it!

I have to admit as I read this back that this scene here:

May be THE most violent and bloody thing ever depicted in a Batman comic book.  There are entrails everywhere, gutted cows, living cows getting stabbed in the head with a somewhat humorous & 1960's "POK!" sound effect.  Every one of the goat-masked workers is soaked in blood, Damian slides through blood with a neatly done "SPLONK" effect as his assailant hits the floor into a pool of blood!  Chunks of meat go flying as a Batman ducks a saw and it strikes one of the dangling corpses...the "camera" follows the meat straight onto a fork that enters the mouth of an apparent Leviathan member "across town" engaged in some sort of dinner party.  One hell of a violent transition from Burnham!

Of note in this pow wow depicted in the bottom left of this page:


...a nurse, a mummy, someone who resembles Rosie The Riveter, an old man, a mobster looking guy, and in the following panel someone who appears to be The Invisible Man.

It's in that final admittedly disgusting panel that we hit our first bit of narration in this issue and it comes from some unseen entity, not a man directly involved in this conflict, rather one who has seemingly set it all up.  "He" inadvertently kills his best friend (the original Goat Head who was acting as bait) in an attempt to cash in on the half billion-dollar bounty Talia Al Ghul had placed on her son Damian Wayne, aka Robin, at the close of Vol. 1.  Two things I feel need to be noted about this assassination attempt; first is Damian's immediate reaction of "It wasn't me! I didn't do it!" which is likely a result of his having to kill Daedalus to save his father and the second is the image of just how far away the assassin is when he makes the shot.  It's an impressive feat for a guy who we learn is named Goatboy due to a combination of Gotham meaning "Home of Goats" and from a Bill Hicks sketch...parental advisory and all that jazz before watching this one:






I must say that I love the art during the scene of Goatboy fleeing from Batman.  The way the rain is drawn, the angles, the Officer Downe and "P-KOW!" billboards, and that I can now see it is "Lone Star" on the side of the trucks.  From a writing standpoint, I also appreciate how much like Batman Goatboy describes himself to be, "I know the secret spots and the hiding places nobody else sees. I know the beat of every cop, where the gangs meet...".  Those are all words/thoughts I could see coming from Batman himself.

Still in the slaughterhouse, Damian saves the life of one cow while Bruce points out that the cattle branded with the upside down star are contaminated.  He also questions Damian on the significance of the two-horned star but Damian is either ignoring him or not paying attention because this:


The contaminated meat plays a part in the next scene as we return to Leviathan's dinner party with a focus on one of the Brothers Grimm as he questions the skull-faced Talia and her Ninja Man-Bats.  She kindly informs him that while the others ate beef, he was fed his brother. Gross...

Jump back to B&R chasing down a Lone Star truck and a discussion between the heroes not only gives us some insight into the Bruce & Damian dynamic but also put this story into a time frame of sorts with a reference to Damian killing Nobody (from the first New 52 Batman & Robin story arc). It also allows us some insight into how Damian looks at his partnership with his father versus his one with Dick Grayson, "I don't know why you bothered to come back from the dead. We were fine without you. We had everything under control."

The dynamic of the Bruce/Damian relationship is very different from that of Dick & Damian.  In that it was more of a brotherly relationship with Damian starting out thinking himself superior to Grayson and ultimately ending in a earned respect after Dick proved himself.  The Bruce/Damian dynamic is the exact opposite and Damian spells it out himself, "Yet here I am, jumping around dressed as a superhero to impress you."  I also appreciate the commentary from Bruce on the hood...it's not the first time someone has mentioned its perils to Damian.

The two running threads converge in the midst of all of this as Talia's Ninja-Bats drop the Grimm brother from the dinner party head-first on the concrete right in front of the Dynamic Duo just as Bruce is again questioning Damian on the significance of the demon star. It's a reminder to the audience of facts that were pointed out in the first volume but we may have forgotten in the interim, "Another name for Algol in the constellation of Perseus. In Arabic, 'Al Ghul'."

Jump from Gotham to San Francisco where a hooded individual enters into an S&M looking shop, requests his "perv suit" (which we see is that of The Hood) in a notably British fashion and descends into the basement where we find Batwing and Old DCU Outsiders members Halo, Looker, and Freight Train (the Dead Heroes Club as BW says)!  This is our first look at how both Batman Inc does and does NOT fit into the world of the New 52.  When last we saw these characters in Vol. 1 Batwing was killed by a horde of Man-Bats while The Outsiders were blown up in space.

Now what makes this difficult is that (a) Batwing, obviously not dead, has been running around in his own series during the entire New 52 and (b) The Outsiders team that got blown up consisted of Halo, Looker, Metamorpho, Freight Train and Katana.  Now the problems: at the time of publication, Katana did not exist in the New 52 and Metamorpho, while mentioned here, has never been shown in the New 52 that I'm aware of yet. Let me Google that see:


Bless the internet's little heart!  That's from the New 52 Justice League International #1 apparently so he has been shown one time since the relaunch.

Anyway, in the case of Inc V2, he isn't called Metamorpho rather Element Man and Freight Train says he was part of the Justice League which contradicts everything Geoff Johns has written about Martian Manhunter being the only other member besides Supes, Bats, WW, Flash, GL, Aquaman, and Cyborg.  As for the other, in the Post-New 52 relaunch Looker popped up in a National Comics book with a completely different look and story but I believe that is considered an alternative continuity.

Couple quick mentions here for this "Batcave West": the giant penny reading "In Stagg We Trust" is presumably a reference to Simon Stagg who has yet to exist in the New 52.  Not sure about the costumes in the trophy cases but right behind Freight Train is a afro/mask combo that screams Black Lightning.

As for the actual story, Hood (who makes mention of Matron & The Agency) and El Gaucho renew their little rivalry from V1 and we get the arrival of the new Wingman. It's a name that I now find quite amusing but I will wait to elaborate on that until I get to the reveal of his identity.


That is one amazing page of art right there!

We get the arrival of The Mutants of Dark Knight Returns fame as well as see a connection between that Dark Tower bag I mentioned earlier that seemed to be just a throwaway gag and the Lone Star truck.  Lone Star distributes the contaminated meat while Dark Tower is the fast food joint giving it to the people. Goatboy makes his return, scoping out Damian for the kill but Batman shows up and...

Well we don't know the "and" just yet because it cuts to the Leviathan scene from earlier, presumably in the Monarch Theater set-up from V1 now that I think about it, where the Skeletor version of Talia is confronting Goatboy and someone else.  Fatherless is back snapping necks while famous pre-New 52 assassins Merlyn and Bronze Tiger (their first New 52 nods) as well as The League of Assassins all get name-dropped.

Goatboy, with Fatherless looming over his shoulder, tells Skele-Talia his tale of shooting Batman in the face and stunning him long enough to accomplish the assassination thanks to Damian's hood being down:


...the hood that now conceals his dead face. End issue one with a shot somewhat familiar to long-time readers:




Issue two certainly makes an immediate impression with its cover art:


Another issue where the first page has little to do with what came before as we are thrown into some sort of hippie-looking benefit concert with the first words being "...So Neptune is in Capricorn", a very odd way to start a Batman story if you ask me.  So a-Googling I went to find out a little more about what that means and this is the page I ended up at here.  The fact that this page delves into the history of Ra's Al Ghul (his first new 52 appearance as well) made the explanation quite amusing to me, especially the last paragraph:

"Their only problem is getting reality to work as they think it should. They may envision a system that runs smoothly, is responsive to the needs of all those involved, and that promotes on merit. It can be frustrating for them to deal with the harsh reality instead."

Seems to sum up Ra's pretty well. He meets a woman named Melisande, gets her pregnant and thus in turning the page we see that this is actually the story of Talia Al Ghul.  This page totally cracks me up and I think you can see why from its companion image:



Back to Melisande for a second.  She did exist prior to this, kind of, in both Birth of the Demon & Son of the Demon of which the latter was considered non-canon until Grant Morrison brought Damian Wayne into the picture at the start of all of this.  The first book, written by Dennis O'Neil, gives Talia's mother no name only states that she met Talia's celibate father (eventually rendered improbable by the existence of other Al Ghul children like Lyssa) at Woodstock, she was of mixed Chinese & Arab descent, and died of a drug overdose.  The second book, written by Mike W. Barr, gives her a name in Melisande and tells a different tale of her death coming by being shoved into a Lazarus Pit.

Talia confronts Ra's face-to-face in current times, talks about how Otto Netz concocted the imagery around which Leviathan is based ("...a mix of warlike colors and terrifying female archetypes"). In a fashion that reminds me of the tale Batman & Robin #0 tells of Damian's origins we see how Talia was brought up fighting ninjas, watching her father bathed in Lazarus pits, learning poisons, buying ponies and airships and all the while, like any parent thinking they can buy their child, Ra's never stopped to, paraphrasing here, wonder what Talia ACTUALLY wanted or needed ("I needed a mother").

It's in the above first meeting with a woman who claims to be Melisande that Talia (and to a degree the reader) begins to learn about the meanings behind her last name.  The fortune teller explains Perseus and the unlucky star Algol located in the eye of the Gorgon, she also claims to be Talia's mother who Talia believed died in child birth (making that origin story #3 for Melisande). An Ubu carts her off to an unknown fate while the origin continues depicting Talia ballet dancing and then it's off to a secret underground lair that I am fairly certain Talia made reference to early in Morrison's run as her birthday present.  Ra's claims it once belonged to the infamous Devil Doctor of Limehouse which (thank you Wiki) is apparently a reference to a character from Alan Moore's League of Extraordinary Gentleman series who in turn is based on Fu Manchu.  Morrison and Moore...

The Sensei (Ra's father in the Old DCU) is referenced as Talia, Ra's, and Ubu are assaulted in the base and I believe this is also the first mention of him in the New 52.  Talia also shows her first real signs of rebelling against Ra's in these sequences as she questions the whereabouts of her mother to which Ra's retorts "...Your mother is dead, Talia. You've always known that."

The story catches up with published history as we get the story from Detective Comics #411 of Talia's abduction by Dr. Darrk, a former member of the League of Assassins. This take on the story puts Talia in control of the situation as she basically tells Darrk that she allowed the abduction to take place which leaves him befuddled.  In typical villain fashion, he threatens mass rape on Talia but only after he tires of raping her first: "...many men will pay for the pleasure of your company when I tire of you" to which Talia casually replies "You would never tire of me, Doctor Darrk" which is a rather confident and certainly shocking retort to the threats Darrk is making.

Cue the "rescue":

Several images pulled from the various books that established Bruce & Talia's relationship and in the following page Talia actually confronts her father for the first time, at least chronologically, about the consciousness transfer rites that framed the entire Resurrections of Ra's Al Ghul story and are the essential reason Ra's "allowed" Damian to exist in the first place.


I really like that first panel as Burnham plays off his earlier images of Talia's chemical experimentation. In that earlier page the fumes formed a skull, this one a heart, it's a nice touch that really demonstrates the different aspects of Talia's personality.  For Bruce it's love, everyone else can die!

Okay maybe it's not exactly love seeing as how the night Bruce & Talia consummated their relationship it appears Talia put that heart-cloud elixir into Bruce's drink prior to their sexual congress.

That "new Alexander" notion pops up again, it's a way Talia has referred to Damian several times during the course of Morrison's Bat-opus and really depicts her intentions for her child.  You can click on the Wiki link for the full details but suffice it to say that Alexander the Great is considered hall of fame level in the history books specifically in the Military Leaders category.

Now I feel I should note that that page is not exactly how the original stories were presented.  The Ra's panels were from Batman #244 and the rest of the page is a take on the events of Son of the Demon.  This is what that sexual encounter looked like originally:


As you can see the spiked drink, the "Alexander" comment, none of that is present in the original presentation BUT it can be there in-between moments.  Talia could very easily be spiking the drink behind the curtain, that Alexander talk could fit in after that last image since the next page in Son picks up afterwards.  Just a nice way that Morrison/Burnham take the story & visuals of what was originally there but play with it to create their own take on events.

Back to the action:

That baby-in-a-bottle image is one that we witnessed previously in the old DCU, specifically in Morrison's Batman & Robin when Talia showed Damian his "brother":

As a matter of fact, the bottle & "Damian vs. Ninjas" images being paired specifically comes from the infamous Batman #666 issue that depicted Damian as the future-Batman:


Nice touch from Burnham or Grant or whoever made that creative choice.

I find particular interest in the final two panels in that Inc page up there because of how they play into the larger New 52 world.  The first of the pair features Talia giving her sales pitch to the villains of the DCU and the cast, while shadowy, very strongly appears to be Lex Luthor facing us, Black Adam way back in the shadow, Deathstroke and perhaps Dr. Psycho with their backs to us, and an unfamiliar head on the video monitor.  Even in the New 52 I suppose it is entirely plausible Deathstroke and Luthor could be involved in this pow-wow but Black Adam hadn't been born into the New 52 yet (see the Shazam back-ups in Justice League for that story) and, if that is Dr. Psycho, what Wiki tells me about his New 52 story wouldn't lead me to believe he would be put in any position to be involved in this meeting.  The foibles of Grant Morrison & The New 52...or maybe it was artist's choice who to include in this cast, I would have to see a script to know for sure.

As for that second panel, that one cements Talia's influence on the R.I.P arc as she inserts General Malenkov (I just found out there is a real life person of that name) into The Black Glove...only for The Joker to eventually kill him.  She also notes in that panel that she is going to introduce the detective to his son which puts this event into a chronological context with the Batman & Son arc that started Morrison's run.

We then get a look back to the moment that really started all of this, that final straw that turned Talia into The Gorgon, the close of Batman & Son that I mentioned in my very first Morrison-blog.  The original from Batman #658


And the Batman Inc #2 version:

 I think the donning of that mask marks the complete turn of Talia to villainy.  There has always been something sad about her, something that made her life feel like a product of manipulation by her father and, to a much lesser degree, perhaps Batman as well. In a deranged way, I think putting that mask on is representative of her finally shedding all of that baggage, taking control, and maybe throwing in some of the pomp & pageantry inherent in the capes & cowls crowd.

That final panel has a call-back to a moment from the Batman: The Return book that preceded Batman Inc. Vol. 1 when Talia mentions her "monster grown in the belly of a whale":


A rather gruesome visual from David Finch that decimated whale corpse; of course we know she is referring to Fatherless who then makes a sudden appearance from out of nowhere (very Batman like) to smash skulls and demonstrate to Ra's that he should now fear his daughter: "Look into the eye of The Gorgon"...


One more issue to cover for this volume of the blog and it features the return of one Batman's most frequently used aliases: Matches Malone!  It's been a long time since Matches has shown his face in Gotham and well there are a few stories in which his name pops up in a Google search, it seems Gotham Underground in 2007 was his last appearance of note.  I fell it is of some importance to mention that original first appearance of the true Matches Malone (not the alias) was way back in Batman #242 AND was as part of a Ra's Al Ghul centered story.  Is it a coincidence that Grant decided to bring him back into the picture as part of a Talia Al Ghul story arc?  Probably not...



The story jumps right into the details of Leviathan's insidious plot to infiltrate Gotham as we see a random woman disappeared in the middle of the train station.  We then see a similar looking female enter into a classroom, hang up a banner bearing Leviathan's sigil, and hold her class at gunpoint while stating "Leviathan brings a better way".  The text box tells us what Burnham's art show us: this is a neglected school in a neglected neighborhood and perfect candidates for Leviathan to recruit/convert.  It's a tactic that our own US military has been accused of using and while I'm not going to argue one way or the other about the validity of those accusations, it is an intriguing take for Morrison to use for Leviathan's tactics.  Also, this is a tactic we saw in V1 only at the time it was in Batwing's neck of the woods in Africa...Leviathan's influence is spreading worldwide!

Before I continue with the story, I want to sidebar to the image Leviathan has co-opted as their own, the Kali Yantra:


You can read a detailed explanation of the Kali Yantra here but in short it is a symbol of the Hindu Goddess Kali (mentioned several times by Talia), and it is intended as a symbol of change and transformation.  It is a positive symbol of a strong female character that Talia & Leviathan have bastardized into their own.

Back to the story and we see just how far the reach of Leviathan has extended when we see what happens to parents complaining about the Leviathan book in schools. First it's a brand new principal at the school making a phone call followed by a police man, the new guy on the force freshly transferred from Keystone City (HI FLASH!) shredding evidence and then planting what certainly sounds like child pornography onto the parents computers.  Then a social worker pulls the kids away from the parents while a newly appointed judge sentences the parent to prison.

That page above really lets us see how deep the teeth of the beast have been sunk into Gotham City as the Khali image points out the recruits: a judge, a cop, a random guy walking on the street, the sidewalk hustler, and the hot dog vendor who is probably selling the contaminated meat from issue #1.  Leviathan is everywhere...


Based on the lyrics, and the name "Warm Heart, Cold Town" that is given a few pages later, the song isn't one I can find in reality so probably something Grant created for the story.  The lyrics are interesting, particularly the last ones on the above page ("...You'll be turned upside down, on your own! Hanging around!") because the name of the story is "The Hanged Man" which in tarot looks like this:


The "Bullet ridden cadaver" comment from Small Fry harkens back to a BKV story where Scarface killed Matches which could possibly mean Morrison is retconning any other appearances by Matches OR simply that gangland rumor hasn't been updated.

Whiskey Road, Small Fry, I don't remember them off the top of my head but a search through the Essential Batman Encyclopedia makes mention of Matches infiltrating the Whiskey Road Gang after Bruce recovered from the injuries sustained in Knightfall at Bane's hands.

Matches talking about getting disappeared is ironic because of what Leviathan is doing in Gotham City and the idea that Matches suffers from Porphyria is quite humorous given that you can almost describe it as being allergic to sunlight. He's Batman...he's allergic to the sun...he's a cave dweller who only comes out at night!

Matches wants Leviathan info, Fry make reference to paying respects to the late Brothers Grimm who we know were killed by Talia & Leviathan, he saves the singer from some thugs while flanked by an undercover crew of El Gaucho, The Hood, and Batwing.  The singer introduces herself as Lumina Lux (Latin for Lights Light) and, of course, Matches goes for it until "Batman" interrupts the proceedings in a scene we have seen play out in various fashion over the years.  Sometimes it's been Alfred in the bat-suit, it's also been Tim Drake, but this time it's Dick Grayson stepping back into the cape & cowl for a minute.

Batcave time as Bruce, Dick, and Damian discuss the situation including some of that back-and-forth between D&D that I miss from their Batman and Robin partnership.  The highlight is probably the line "How does it feel to be the new dead Robin, Damian?"...


The web of Leviathan, a symbol we saw used quite prevalently in the Otto Netz story, only this time we have faces on the board.  Let's see if I can hit all the marks:  Leviathan/Talia is at the center and one thread spills out to Fatherless while another to Ra's Al Ghul, a third to Lord Death Man, a fourth to Jezebel Jet's severed head, a 5th to that training school for killer girls we saw in the Leviathan Strikes Stephanie Brown story, and another to the Spyral web from that same story.  The web than goes nuts from there and basically includes every major & minor player from the whole of Morrison's run.  We see Netz, Gaucho, Kathy Kane Batwoman, both Pyg's, Dr. Hurt, Black Glove, Wingman, Jason Todd, the 99 Fiends...you get the idea.  It's all connected and, as Damian says, it's really not Leviathan at the center, "It's us. We're at the center of all this."

There's something adorable about the following page's image of Alfred carrying for Bat-Cow but there is nothing adorable about the message he brings: the cows are indeed infected with a derivation of Prof. Pyg's mind control drug we saw in Batman & Robin. Bruce's concern is evident in how Burnham draws him as is Damian's annoyance at being grounded for his own safety.  I also find it touching how Damian firmly believes that without him Batman is the one in danger not vice versa.

Matches meets with Goatboy in bar called Three Eyed Jacks (nothing to make me think the name has significance, just found a One Eyed Jacks brothel in Twin Peaks) and this sequence does more for me to establish that Goatboy is more than he seems.  Visually he looks like a down on his luck loser but we know from issue #1 that he is an amazing shot with a Batman-level sense of the city.  This interaction lets us see his awareness of all the elements playing into Talia's schemes; the Lilith, Kali, and Leviathan imagery...the mythology she is playing with, the "...creepy stuff you look up on the Internet" as Goatboy says (which is exactly what most people reading these books and definitely anyone writing about them is doing).  The fact that he has also "...heard the rumor they used Batman's DNA to build a Frankenstein monster" also makes me believe Goatboy is more in the loop than he would have Matches believe...he may even be feeding this information to Matches at Talia's behest.


The entire Lumina sequence brings to mind the dynamic of Jezebel & Bruce's relationship in that he was being played from the beginning but I think it's safe to say Bruce was well aware of that fact especially when he went to a door with a goat head knocker on it.  Bruce comes off like a sucker for a pretty face hiding dangerous secrets quite a bit but most of the time I figure he knows what he's getting into and just plays along to see where it's going.


So Damian takes on the Redbird identity to circumvent the "Robin is grounded" rule and, although he knocks Alfred out, I think that 4th panel actually says a lot about how D has changed.  The one who first appeared in Batman & Son wouldn't have taken a second to acknowledge Alfred, he likely would have knocked him out with a club to the head rather than the kinder gentler gassing method.

The following page is a terrifying cascade of images and giant Punch & Judy-style heads, heck Morrison even uses the name Jack Ketch for the hangman here.  Goatboy is involved here, Small Fry is one of his three sacrifices, Matches is intended to be the third, and the second...while only shown in shadow, appears to be a small child which leads me to believe it is the son Goatboy has mentioned several times over.  We bid farewell to Matches, for this issue at least, with him striking a match for some unknown reason.

This entire sequence does make me question if it was Talia orchestrating the situation here (she would presumably be aware of Bruce's usage of the Matches identity) OR if it is all a play by Goatboy, based on Matches' inquiries into Leviathan, used to secure his spot in the League of Assassins?



The closing sequence is a great depiction by Burnham of just why Damian is such a dangerous kid. He takes down three thugs guarding the house who never even realize where he is coming from and does so in complete silence. My favorite of these pages are the vertical panels and how they convey the action...just beautiful...second favorite is the CLANG!CLANG!CLANG! emanating from the alarm in that circular fashion.  I'm a sucker for awesome usage of sound effects...


That will wrap it up for this installment with Damian fighting dogs, Matches striking matches, and Alfred unconscious in the Batcave.  The threat of Leviathan looms strong over Gotham but contrary to the next issue blurb, the next issue will not "enter the kill box" but rather it will be a flashback to the beginnings of Batman Inc with DC's Zero Month.  See issue #3 got delayed because of its content and shipping proximity to the Dark Knight Rises theater shooting which then pushed everything else back so instead of it being #3, #4, and then #0 it ended up being #3, #0, and then #4.






Saturday, February 16, 2013

Can You Ever Go Home Again? - Jason Todd Part 1



Here is the complete version of the first part of the Jason Todd script I wrote a few years ago.  I apologize for the screwed up layout, but no matter how many times I tried correcting the problems, instead of getting fixed, it just kept coming out bad in different fashions. 

I never did come up with a title for this story...maybe something like "Can You Ever Go Home Again?"


Page 1


FULL PAGE
JASON TODD, in his RED HOOD apparel, stands on a rooftop overlooking Gotham City.  Snow falls around him; an electronic billboard behind him reads “ONLY 3 SHOPPING DAYS LEFT UNTIL CHRISTMAS! GO TO WWW.IWANTTOYS.COM FOR RUSH DELIVERY!”
JASON TODD
(Caption)
Another white Christmas, another day for family and friends, another day to pretend it’s all okay,
Page 2
1- Jason hops down onto the fire escape, taking the long way to the street for once.
2- As he descends, he passes a window with Xmas light and a tree
3- A family eating dinner together
4- An older man by himself watching TV in the dark
5 - Jason stops halfway down, looks out over the city…
JASON TODD
(caption)
No crime.  Maybe the first day since Bruce… (pause)
Page 3
1- An open window, minimal Xmas decoration, a single father and his kid arguing over something catches Jason’s attention for a moment.
2- Back to Jason perched on the fire escape…
JASON TODD
(caption)
…since Batman abandoned this hellhole.
3 - Jason hops down into a familiar alley from the fire escape. Graffiti is visible reading, “ABANDON ALL HOPE YOU WHO ENTER CRIME ALLEY”
JASON TODD
Wherever you went, whatever you’re doing, I hope you know that you gave up.  In the end, Bruce, you gave up.
4- Jason pops the seal off his Red Hood helmet.
5 - Jason kneels down, setting the helmet on the ground to his side, a slight smile on his face.
6 - Tight on Jason placing two bullets on the ground next to a couple of withered roses, something left over from Bruce’s yearly visit.
Page 4
 FULL PAGE
Jason stands over the flowers and the bullets, helmet in hand at his side, staring at this landmark in Bat-history, the smile on his face faded to solemnity.  The snowfall is getting harder, and you can see the kid from earlier storming away in the BG.
JASON TODD
What would Mommy and Daddy think of you right now Bruce? What happened to that precious vow you drilled into my head once upon a time?
Page 5
1 - Jason turns his head to an off panel yelling voice.
 YELLING VOICE
Come back here Jason!
2 - Father from previous page standing under streetlight, dressed in some sort of overalls, as if he worked in a factory. A package is in his left hand, a cell phone in his right. In BG, the figure of Jason Todd can be seen scaling back to the rooftops via “Batline”.
FATHER
Jason! Jason! Get back here son!
 3 - JASON, the son, can be seen in the distance running off into the ever-increasing snowfall, maybe from a perspective over his father’s shoulder.
 4 - Father is shown walking back into the building with the cell phone at his ear.
FATHER
Hello? No, he’d rather run off than talk to his mother.
Page 6
1 - Jason Todd, with helmet back on, watching from the rooftop as the kid Jason runs down the street.
 JASON TODD
(caption)
Well this may end up a way to cure my boredom.
 
2 - CLOSE Kid Jason stops running, dressed in a pair of ripped jeans, long sleeved thermal shirt, shoes that are one stitch away from falling apart, skull cap, and no coat.
3 - Kid Jason wanders into a different alleyway, looking over his shoulder to make sure Father isn’t following him.
4- Kid Jason runs smack into the chest of a massive individual.
5 - Kid Jason looks up, eyes wide…
KID JASON
Oh $*&^!!
6 - Kid Jason is staring up at AMYGDALA, a man not seen in a long time.
7 - Terrified Kid Jason backing away from Amygdala, Jason Todd barely visible in the BG on a rooftop.
AMYGDALA
Why are you come into my alley?
 KID JASON
Umm, umm, uhhh.
 AMYGDALA
(yelling)
WHY YOU COME TO MY ALLEY?
 KID JASON
I just wanted to get away!
Page 7
1 - Amygdala’s body language is evident of the rage fading as quickly as it came.  His shoulders drop, his eyes get soft, and a child-like innocence takes the place of the raging hulk.
 AMYGDALA
Oh. I tried to get away before too, that’s how I got here to my new home.
 KID JASON
Home? This is your home?
 2 - Amygdala’s body tenses up again, he feels mocked.
AMYGDALA
You don’t like my home? What’s wrong with my home?
 KID JASON
(scared)
Nothing. Nothing’s wrong with your home, it’s nice. Big.
3 - Amygdala lets out a deep breath and relaxes.  It’s obvious he’s regressed from the last time he was seen in Nightwing.
AMYGDALA
It not as nice as my last home, but that went boom a long, long time ago.
KID JASON
Boom?
 AMYGDALA
Yeah, explodeded.
4 - Kid Jason backs away a little as Amygdala sits down on a stack of old cardboard boxes.  The snowfall has started to lighten up, as have the winds whipping the debris around.
KID JASON
What did you d….I mean what happened?
5 - Jason Todd descends from the rooftop onto a nearby fire escape, attempting to get a closer listen to Amygdala’s tale.
 6 - The stack of boxes Amygdala is sitting on gives out under his weight, it’s almost comedic but Kid Jason won’t laugh out of fear, and Amygdala doesn’t even notice.
7 - Amygdala looks up to the sky, like he’s searching for the answer somewhere up there, a bit of a mournful look on his face.
AMYGDALA
Ummm…I don’t remember so good, but I think I was watching TV when my whole home just went KABOOM!  There was smoke and fire and somehow I made it alive, and at the funeral it was just me and the nice guy with black hair.
 8 - Wider shot of the alley, Kid Jason has gotten a little closer to Amygdala.
KID JASON
Do you remember his name?
 AMYGDALA
No.  But he was a nice guy, always made sure I took my pills he did.  He might have helped me get a job too at that prison I worked at maybe.
KID JASON
Okay, so how’d you end up here at…at your new home?
 AMYGDALA
I runned…
 Page 8
 1 - Flashback scene of Amygdala being talked to by police.
AMYGDALA
(caption)
The policemans tried to find my family, but I hadn’t seen them since they put me in a hospital before the doctors did sumthin’ to me.
 2 - Flashback of the police being assaulted by Amygdala
AMYGDALA
(caption)
I think, I think they tried to put me in their car, but I didn’t wanna go.  I think maybe I hurt somebody bad…
 3 - Flashback of Amygdala tipping over the police car.
AMYGDALA
I think I broked their car too, but then I just ran cause I think they tried to shock me.  I can’t think too good, my medicine got burnt up in the fire and I wasn’t feeling good that day.
 4 - Kid Jason with a terrified look on his face that he’s trying to fight.  He’s taken a few steps back from his erstwhile friend but trying not too be obvious about it.
5 - Jason Todd has fully come to ground and is listening from the shadows.
KID JASON
(off panel)
What did the doctors do ta ya?
 6 -Amygdala rubs his eyes, possibly wiping away a tear…
AMYGDALA
Did sumthin’ to my brain that was s‘pposed to make me better. But now I’m s‘pposed ta take medicine all the time and I don’t got none.  Ain’t had any for a long time, long as I been here.
 7 - Kid Jason comes closer again, sitting down on a box next to Amygdala, almost compassionate.
KID JASON
How long’ve you been here?
AMYGDALA
I dunno.  I ran from the policeman ‘til I couldn’t run anymore and then I was here, and then you was here.  Ummm…I think this is the second time it’s snowed since I been here.  No one tells me nuthin no more, no more friends…
8 - Finally shattering his fear, Kid Jason puts a comforting hand on Amygdala’s shoulder…
 KID JASON
I guess, uh, I guess…you’ve got a friend now.
 Page 9 
1 - Amygdala’s eyes light up like the fourth of July, a huge grin on his face as he stands up, dwarfing Kid Jason.
 AMYGDALA
Friend?  I have a friend? FRIEND!!!!
2 - Amygdala scoops up Kid Jason and gives him the bear hug to end all bear hugs, spinning around in jubilant celebration.
 AMYGDALA
FRIEND! FRIEND! FRIEND! I HAVE FRIEND!
 3- Jason Todd pops off his Red Hood helmet, a half smile on his face as he watches the spectacle before him.
4 - Kid Jason’s face is turning a light shade of blue as Amygdala’s hug squeezes the life out of him.
KID JASON
Can’t….breath….st….op…
 5 - Amygdala puts Kid Jason down with a playful look on his face.  He’s the happiest he’s been in years!
AMYGDALA
I sorry friend.  Sometimes I don’t know when I hurt sumthin’ cause I’m really strong, even when I was small.
 KID JASON
(coughing)
Hard to believe you were ever small…
 6 - Amygdala’s body language does a complete 180, he doesn’t get jokes, close on his head as he yells with veins bulging.
AMYGDALA
You make fun of me?  YOU MAKIN’ FUN OF ME?!?!?
 7 - Jason Todd slowly pulling his gun out from his waist holster…
8 - Kid Jason backpedals, taken totally off guard by his new friend’s explosion…
 KID JASON
No, no, no!  I was just havin’ fun with ya! That’s what friends do sometimes, have fun with each other!
 AMYGDALA
(confused)
Really? Have fun? Last friend who want’d to have fun wore a talkin’ sock on his hand.  His fun was robbin’ a store and tryin’ to kill Batman. This is more fun…
Page 10
 1 - Jason Todd relaxes his grip on the gun in his holster, and lets out a deep breath.  For once, he doesn’t want to kill anything.
2 - Amygdala sits down on top of a dumpster against the wall, Kid Jason kind of mulls around the area, kicking at cans and the like
AMYGDALA
Why you run away friend?
 KID JASON
I guess I was tired of dealin’ with it all.  Tired of being a disappointment.
3 - Jason Todd winces at that word, cueing a flashback to…
4 - Batman #424 when Jason let someone die, telling Batman “He Slipped”
5 - Back to Kid Jason and Amygdala, Kid Jason looking at something in his hand that he picked up off the ground.
KID JASON
See, I guess I’ve been blamin’ my dad for my parents breakin’ up. He works all the time, never home, hell he won’t even be home for Christmas.
 6 - Kid Jason throws the crushed can at the wall...
7 - Tings down at the feet of Jason Todd.
8 - Jason Todd’s face looks softer than it has previously…
Page 11
 1 - Kid Jason looks cold for the first time tonight as he wipes a tear from his eye
AMYGDALA
(clueless)
Chris’mas?
 KID JASON
Yeah, Christmas.  So I told him I hated him, and that I wanted to go live with my mom.  Didn’t realize how much it hurt him.
 2 - Jason Todd, biting his lower lip until blood comes out cues…
3 - Flashback to Batman #425 when Jason Todd’s mistakes cost three people their lives, and Bruce‘s disappointment…
4 - Kid Jason sits down as Amygdala stands up and wanders over to the opposite side of the alley.  The entry to the alley is visible in the BG behind Kid Jason, the snow and winds have started to pick up again.
KID JASON
So he picked up the phone, dialed my mom up, and told her I had a question to ask her.  Truth is there’s no way in hell I would wanna go live with that…that…that bitch!
 5 - Jason Todd, hands on his forehead, as if the memories hurt…
6 - Flashback to Batman 427 as Sheila Haywood stands next to the Joker over Jason Todd’s bloody, beaten body.
7 - Kid Jason, his head also in his hands, wipes the tears away.
KID JASON
She’s the terrible one. She cheated on my dad, she left us high and dry, she…
 MOCKING VOICE
(off panel)
WAAAAAAAAAH! My mommy sucks! WAAAAAHHH!
 8 - Four thugs (Jerry, Lynn, Evan, Joe) stand in the entrance to the alley.  Two carry baseball bats, one has a crowbar, and the other appears unarmed.  The snow is whipping around them in a frenzy, collecting on their shoulders, hats, and feet.  They have obviously been standing there awhile.
JERRY
Life sucks kid, parent suck too.  Why don’t ya go and cut yourself over it?
 LYNN
(swinging the bat at his side)
But first…why don’t you give us everything you got?
 Page 12 
1 - Jason Todd slides his Red Hood helmet back on over his face.  Is that melted snow or a tear on his cheek?
 2 - Amygdala is out of the line of sight of the four thugs.  His arms are tensing up, he is beginning to perspire despite the freezing temperatures, his eyes are bulging.  The beast is ready to come out…
3 - Jerry steps a little closer to Kid Jason, crowbar pointed at the juvenile as he falls backwards over the box he was sitting on.
JERRY
Better yet, how about you take us to your daddy’s house and give us everything he’s got too.
 EVAN
(giggling)
And then you can take us ta yer mommy’s house and we can take what she’s got too!
 4 - All four men stand there, laughing over the scared kid they’re bullying, in the BG the light reflects off Jason Todd’s helmet.
5 - Same, but a massive hand has grabbed Evan around the neck.
6 - Amygdala, roaring incoherently, slams Evan’s head into the brick wall of the alley.
7 - A bloody smear is left behind as his dead body slides to the ground.
8- Kid Jason hiding behind the dumpster from earlier...
Page 13
 1 - Amygdala stares down Jerry, Lynn, and Joe. Blood staining his hand.  The three remaining thugs are pissing themselves quite literally.
AMYGDALA
WHY YOU TRY HURT ME? WHY YOU HURT?!?!?
2 - Lynn charges at Amygdala with a bat in hand.
3 - Amygdala snatches the bat in one hand while snapping Lynn’s neck with his other hand
4 - Kid Jason tries to stand up from behind the dumpster, but Lynn’s body slams against the wall over his head and slides down right in front of him.
5 - Kid Jason runs out from behind the dumpster,
6 - Joe catches him, puts a gun to his head
7 - A gloved hand comes out of the shadows, crooked blade in hand, and slits the throat of the would-be killer.
JASON TODD
Not a good idea.
8- Kid Jason runs without looking back as Amygdala, in the BG towers over Jerry.
Page 14
 FULL PAGE
 Amygdala stands over Jerry, gigantic in his rage.  Jerry has fallen to the ground, flailing the crowbar in the air as Amygdala descends upon him
JERRY
I just wanted some money!  I just needed some money! Don’t kill me!
Page 15
 1 - Amygdala swats the crowbar away.
2 - Amygdala puts one foot on the chest of Jerry and begins to push.
3 - Blood begins to pour out of Jerry’s mouth as Amygdala’s weight crushes him
JERRY
Just….had….feed….kidsss
 4 - Finally it ends with a sickening CRUNCH as Amygdala presses his foot completely into the chest cavity of Jerry, crushing his ribs, lungs, heart, etc.
5 - Tight on Kid Jason retching his guts up behind a stack of boxes and trash…
Page 16
FULL PAGE
Standing there, covered in blood and sweat, Amygdala’s breath is heavy and visible in the cold December air.  Faint strands of “Here Comes Santa Claus” can be heard from one of the few shops still open on the street only yards away.
Page 17
1 - Kid Jason emerges from his hiding spot, wiping vomit off his chin…
KID JASON
Oh, my goooooooo….
 2 - Amygdala, still wrapped in a fit of berserk rage, grabs his “friend” by the shoulders and slams him against a wall.  A loud crack can be heard, a rib popping more than likely, as Kid Jason screams.
3 - Amygdala, his faces inches away from Kid Jason’s, contorted in fit of rage, slobber flying as he yells.
AMYGDALA
WHY YOU HURT ME? WHY YOU BRING MEN TO HURT ME?
 KID JASON
(wincing)
I didn’t do anything. I just wanted to be your friend.
 AMYGDALA
LIAR! NOT FRIEND! YOU HURT ME! BRING MEN TO HURT ME!
 4 - Kid Jason is crying; the snow and wind are in a fury to match that of Amygdala’s, the blood stain Lynn left behind is on the wall next to Kid Jason’s head.
KID JASON
(screaming)
HELP! HELP! SOMEBODY HEL…
 5 - Amygdala’s hand closes around the neck of Kid Jason, cutting off his cry for help.
AMYGDALA
(insane calm)
Not friend, you liar, just like everybody.  Now you die, no more hurting Amyg…
6 - A pair of gunshots ring out from off panel, blood splatters across the face of Kid Jason.
 
Page 18
FULL PAGE - KID JASON’S POV
Jason Todd stands there with a smoking gun in each hand, Red Hood helmet on, crooked knife visible in his waistband “utility belt” still stained with blood.  The wind whipping garbage and snow around at his feet, the dead bodies of Jerry and Joe on the ground.  The only sound is that of “Here comes Santa Claus” fading into “Silent Night”…
Page 19
1 - Jason Todd puts one more bullet into the head of Amygdala for good measure before he so much as looks at Kid Jason.
2 - Kid Jason, trembling, crying, covered in blood, throws up what little was left in his stomach.  This kid isn’t meant for such violence.
3 - Jason Todd squats down and locks eyes with Kid Jason for the first time.  Amygdala’s brain matter, skull, and blood are matted into the kid’s hair and all over his face.  It’s like Jason is truly seeing the result of his methods for the first time.
KID JASON
Why?
 JASON TODD
What?
KID JASON
W…w…why did you kill him?
 4 - Jason Todd stands up, holsters his gun, and snaps the locks on his Red Hood helmets loose.
 JASON TODD
He was going to kill you.  Don’t…don’t think for a second he was your friend kid.
 5 - Jason looks at the kid intently, dumbfounded by his reaction.  He expected gratitude, thank you’s, not recrimination.
KID JASON
He was sick…you’re sick.  This is…this is just sick.
 6 - Kid Jason tries to stand, Jason Todd reaches out to help but his hand is swatted away.
KID JASON
There’s dead people. Oh god there’s dead people. And you…you…you’re okay with this?
 JASON
(somber)
None of these people will ever harm another soul kid. No one like you will ever be hurt again.
 KID JASON
(gagging)
But none of ‘em will ever get a chance to do right either.  This guy, I didn’t even know his name yet…I didn’t even…
 7 - Kid Jason collapses back to the ground, sobbing uncontrollably, the gravity of the situation finally hitting him.
KID JASON
…didn’t even know his name.
 8 - Jason Todd, obviously affected by this, puts his Red Hood helmet back on.  The familiar lights of the police cars reflect on the snow and the alley walls while the sirens overtake the tune of “Silent Night”.
JASON TODD
It was Amyg…it was Aaron.  His name was Aaron. Go home to your Dad kid, he’s probably worried sick.  And don’t take it for granted, you never know when he’ll just…be….gone.
 Page 20
FULL PAGE- OVERHEAD
 Police rushing into the alleyway, Kid Jason crumbling into the arms of an officer, five dead bodies, lots of blood and snow, and Jason Todd’s head in the corner looking down over the entire scene.
JASON TODD
(caption)
Doubt…
Page 20 
1 - Jason Todd in Red Hood helmet speeding away on a motorcycle, snow and wind swirling all around him.
 JASON TODD
(caption)
..the last thing I need is doubt.  But what that kid said, I can’t shake it.
 2 - Same 
JASON TODD
(caption)
I looked at him; all I could think of was Bruce.  An alley, a gun, a blood covered kid.  Bruce.
 3 - Same 
JASON TODD
(caption)
I’ve heard it all before, the lines about redemption, but this was different. It wasn’t coming from holier-than-thou Batman…
 4 - Same
JASON TODD
(caption)
It was the face of innocence.  It was Dick at the circus, it was me and Dent, it was…it was Tim and Boomerang‘s kid.
 5 - Same 
JASON TODD
(caption)
But that way, Bruce…Batman’s way, it hasn’t worked. Joker’s still out there, Harvey, Cobblepot, Bane, even…even Bane.
 6 - The back wheel catches on ice, the bike slides out from underneath Jason Todd, sending him crashing into a snow bank.
Page 21 
1 - Jason Todd sits up out of the snow bank, protected from any serious injury by his helmet & body armor. The bike though, the bike is not so good, fixable, but unrideable.
 JASON TODD
Bane…even Bane.
 2 - Jason Todd picks the bike up, looks up at his surrounding, and lets out a bit of a laugh.  He hadn’t been really paying attention to where he was driving apparently.
 JASON TODD
(caption)
Bane shattered him, broke him, and Batman still let him live.  It’s like he forgave him, like he didn’t hold that hate in…in his heart.
3 - Jason Todd walking down the road with the bike despite intense snowfall and bone chilling winds.  One gun is missing from his waist holster, unknowingly left buried in the snow.
JASON TODD
(caption)
It wasn’t about hate for Bruce, it…it wasn’t about revenge.  Justice, always justice, blind justice.  He believed in it, maybe to a fault, but he believed in it.
4 - Jason stops walking, pops off his helmet, and looks into the snow.  In the BG, a set of bars, like a gate, are visible.
 JASON TODD
(caption)
Maybe justice isn’t possibly always, maybe rehabilitation doesn’t always work, but for Bruce, it was enough to know he tried.  As long as he tried…
5 - Interior of the Batcave, still in disrepair from the Black Glove, shot on the shattered case containing Jason Todd’s Robin costume.
 
JASON TODD
(caption)
I don’t know if I’ll ever find my way back to your side of the fence Bruce, if I’ll ever be as “Batman” as you dreamed, save that for Tim and Dick, but maybe…just maybe...
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Jason Todd stands just outside the gates of Wayne Manor.  It’s hard to tell the state of the Manor due to darkness and the snow, but it seems as if some windows are still busted out, the scars of what happened in RIP still remain.  I’m picturing a panel from Robin #7 when Bruce sees the state of the manor under AzBats watch.  It’s looming, towering over Jason Todd, imposing, with the words “WAYNE” on the top of the gate half covered in snow.
JASON TODD
..maybe it’s time to go home again.

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